Today we had to make a comment to post to are friends and then screenshot are work to make improvements. But we had a list to make sure that we have every thing because this would make a great comment. My changes were that hi need to have something thoughtful like you could do some more photos to make it look better. But I thing that he could have done some writing. My partner was Bilal and we read each others blog posts. This was fun to see how good it is to me and it was hard and fun at the same time
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